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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2006-07-15 11:10 PM

A young doe and her twin spotted fawns
ramble 'neath gnarled oaks and gently swaying pines.
Snow capped Mt Adams looms
in the background
on this warm summer's eve.
I embrace the surrealistic scene before me.
And as I prepare to take leave
of this mini-paradise,
return to my humble abode
and job two hundred miles south
of my own single fawn,
now following her own starlight and dreams,
it’s a mother’s heart that stays behind
at the crest of that hill
which overlooks the pastures
where a herd of white horses
sometimes stands still at sunset,
staring as the last rays bend the day into night.

And in the afterglow of this sunset,
a mother’s heart beats contentedly,
knowing her child’s passionate dream
has come true.

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

1 posted 2006-07-15 11:17 PM

Love this poem. The setting sounds so beautiful.

I have a single fawn too.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-07-16 08:31 AM

this touches my heart Kacy

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2006-07-16 09:59 AM

Oh, Kacy, this is smile-beautiful. Obviously about leaving your daughter after your visit with her and the Lippizaners.

Oops, suddenly (in spite of being born with good spelling!) can't remember whether there are 2 p's or 2 Z's or both - and I can't get up to see if it's in my dictionary, because my kitty-cat is lying on my leg, and in this household (and in my childhood household too) there is a law that you don't disturb a cat if unless you absolutely have to.

- Owl

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2006-07-16 11:32 AM

Kacy~

'it’s a mother’s heart that stays behind
at the crest of that hill
which overlooks the pastures
where a herd of white horses
sometimes stands still at sunset,
staring as the last rays bend the day into night.

And in the afterglow of this sunset,
a mother’s heart beats contentedly,
knowing her child’s passionate dream
has come true.'

I felt such soft love flowing through these thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

5 posted 2006-07-16 12:07 PM

I have my own single fawn, too
love this

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

zaz
Junior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 26

6 posted 2006-07-16 12:15 PM

excellent images,

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-07-16 04:44 PM

"of my own single fawn,
now following her own starlight and dreams,"

Oh, Kacy. You speak my language and make my heart smile.

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