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Open Poetry #38

One Minute More

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-07-15 01:03 AM

One Minute More

You don't have to stay
with me one minute more
that you want too.
Why would I want you to.
Well, I know at least one reason.
Because I'm in love with you.
But sometimes that doesn't matter,
like when only one heart
chooses to be true.
And that's why
you don't have to stay
with me one minute more
than you want too,
and I know that
your heart won't let you,
unless you love me too.

JamesLee
11July
2006

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2006-07-15 01:20 AM

I like this. I hope she stayed.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2006-07-15 01:31 AM

Thanks aziza...I like it too...it helped me feel better...no she didn't stay...but she didn't have too...unless her heart wanted her too...James

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

3 posted 2006-07-15 04:03 AM

Very true. And your love shows in your allowing your love to go... Nice write.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

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