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divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon

0 posted 2006-07-12 10:01 PM



Tell me now,
what do you see
When you take a look at me?

Chestnut curls, mussed by the wind,
Eyes of smokey misted blue,
Sweetberry lips in a seductive grin,
Loving arms that reach for you?

Perhaps you still see long lean legs
the pleasing curve from hip to waist
The gentle swell of rising breasts
Belonging to the girl from eons past.

Please look a little closer, dear,
There's much more to this work of art
My soul soars bravely, without fear
I'm more than the sum of all of my parts

These eyes could tell of galaxies
my dreamer's heart created
Of damson moons and cherry stars
In vanilla skies suspended

From these nectareous, berried lips,
I entreat you to drink freely
Of the passion of a thousand years,
Rivaled only by goddess, Kundalini

My womb has birthed a universe,
Held dear in my arms' span,
Nurturing breasts feed distant worlds
That I alone command

Brilliant stars, by my hand led,
Born of my tears so precious,
Form the circlet that adorns
Cascading mahogany tresses

My blazing moon, in purple hues,
From amethyst to lavendar
Is the splendid crowning glory
of my violaceous scepter

I challenge you, my champion,
Captive of the land and sky,
Cast away your earthly chains
Let your spirit with mine fly

There's more than just this body
this sleeping shell of flesh and bone
look now, beyond this mortal veil
to where my essence finds its home

Please take my hand, I'll guide you
Where our hearts can soar so free
And we'll trip the light fantastic
To imagination's symphony

Tell me,
now what do you see
When, with closed eyes,
You look at me?

[This message has been edited by divine chaos (07-12-2006 11:48 PM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-07-12 10:05 PM


Thank you, mother to the universe...



You are soaring now!


divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
2 posted 2006-07-12 10:08 PM


*grins*
In our own little worlds,
we are all royalty

~Sheli~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
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Portland, OR
3 posted 2006-07-12 10:08 PM


Aw, this is sweet. You put out a good message. Awesome write!

Kristabell

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-07-12 10:10 PM



B E A U T I F U L ! !

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2006-07-13 12:08 PM


Okay, I wasn't go to bring this to the pages here
But who you are is all I hold dear.
You are a woman of a complex nature
You have a soul that is beautiful and pure.
You are a goddess with a radiant sheen
What you are no(NOT) is a regal Queen!
That is me and you need to back away
Or "OFF WITH YOUR HEAD!" I'll have to say
I am Queen of the Rockettes and more
There is nothing in life that I am more sure.
You are talented, beautiful and a darlin' friend
But on the Queen issue -- your delusions have to come to an end!

QoR

Love you and this was for your own good
(wanders out and grins)

divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
6 posted 2006-07-13 12:14 PM


thank you all for your words, I'm glad you enjoyed the read


now for aziza -- *rolls, giggling*

aziza, sweet, my friend so dear
whatever are you smoking?
to say that I am not the Queen..
well, surely you are joking.  

Look at me, I have the crown,
the scepter and the dress!
but, for you, I shall concede
You can be Queen, and I shall be THE Goddess.

*smirks*
love you too!
~Sheli~

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
7 posted 2006-07-13 12:19 PM


Darlin', that's a carrot
you hold in your hand
It's true I am Queen
I rule all over Divine Chaos land
You can be a goddess
With a jeweled crown
and a lovely dress
While I have power
and instill dread
every time I yell,
"OFF WITH HER HEAD!"

QoR

Now stop or they will kick us out!

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
8 posted 2006-07-13 12:25 PM


i believe that what you suffer from
they call delusions of grandeur
how can you think the power of Queen
trumps that of Goddess pure?

As for your crazed hallucinations
that you instill feelings of dread
To you, I'll say this only once
THPPPPPPPTTTT!!!
I'm off to bed

*grins and dances off*
see you in the morning, lovely (but less powerful than the goddess) one

~*Sheli*~

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
9 posted 2006-07-13 12:44 PM


:: Whispers ::

You really don't see
You are ONLY goddess
Because of my decree!

Sleep tight and I love you, oh delusional one.

My apologies to all others in this site -- we really are certifiable!  Or, at least, she is!

^justred^
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since 2006-07-13
Posts 1
Illinois
10 posted 2006-07-13 08:34 AM


i laugh while you two poke your fun...
you're distracted, so i'm almost done.

The fact is neither here nor there...
which is Queen its hardly fair.

To banter as you've done you see...
you've passed down the Queenly goods to me.

The ceptor and the crown fit fine
within my hand & on regal head of mine.

For a Queen would hardly argue power...
So now dear two, tis time to cower.

The reign was simply within my grasp...
so bow down, pucker and kiss my @$$....

love you both! *giggles*
^justred^/miri/zora/whoevertheheckiam

passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2006-07-13 09:30 AM


another outstanding piece!
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
12 posted 2006-07-13 10:05 AM


:: aziza stares in horror, then pokes Sheli, whispering, "See what you've done now! ::

Thank you for joining in our fun.

aziza

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
13 posted 2006-07-13 10:20 AM


I din't do nuffin!
I'll deal with you two in IM before we all get booted off the boards for being certifiable.
*laughs*


By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

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