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divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

0 posted 2006-07-12 12:40 PM

Caught in a writer's block I roamed
in search of my last muse, who had left home

I looked out at the corner store
They said they hadn't seen her
The store clerk gave me a weird look
Geez, he's such a weiner

I wandered while I pondered
where could she be, oh where?!
then it hit me to check Ebay
whatever "IT" is, you'll find "IT" there.

Alas, I didn't find her there
No more ideas up my sleeve
But she didn't disappear into thin air --
Oh, I know!I'll Ask Jeeves

The butler was a little stuffy
And he wasn't very helpful
I thought, "maybe I can Google her,"
But even that was doubtful

I Googled, and I Googled
and I clicked through every forum
and one day I tripped right into one
with the most fantastic poems

I read, commented, smiled and wept
As off the screen the words just leapt
The images they brought to view
were in infinite colors, in every hue

For just a bit, I abandoned my search
And in the pages my soul set sail
and I waved to an Angel of the Earth
As she swung by on a comet's tail

I basked in the glow of Midnite Sun
Where the mute had found his voice
HopeS of Sunshine filled my thoughts
And did my lonely heart rejoice!

Passing shadows and naked thoughts
Do still dance within my view
But a poet's not a poet without
a few Dark Strangers or Shadows in Blue

I found an Enchantress' fairy picking flowers,
and some dandy Grandie Girlies
who, for dad, were pouting prettily
Eyes shining with luminosity

How surprised was I to realize,
As the pages I went through
Revealed what I was searching for,
My missing muses were here with you!

If within my simple penning
Your name you do not find
It isn't that you haven't touched me
I've just run out of time!

Work says it's time to end this rhyme
One more stanza and I'm through
To the PiPsters, one and all,
Say my muses and I, "Thank YOU!"

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

1 posted 2006-07-12 01:48 PM

So cute and wonderful rhyme , sending smiles across the miles

Hope

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-07-12 02:44 PM

Sheli~
How clever, clever, clever~

And not just because I know those Grandie Girlies upclose and personal~

'I found an Enchantress' fairy picking flowers,
and some dandy Grandie Girlies
who, for dad, were pouting prettily
Eyes shining with luminosity'

But ... you put us in sweet Enchantress' garden and made sure our dear Luminosity was there too~

Makes for a wonderful way to untie the ink of that muse of yours~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2006-07-12 03:36 PM

"For just a bit, I abandoned my search
And in the pages my soul set sail
and I waved to an Angel of the Earth
As she swung by on a comet's tail"

It appears that your muse is in full swing!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-07-12 04:18 PM

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I am sure that at one time or another, dear Poet, several of us have come in to say "Thanks, Ron, for giving us Passions!"

While we had passion all along, little did we know the community of poets that we would find...

all within blue halls...

So, dear DC...thank YOU for going on the Search!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-07-12 04:45 PM

"I found an Enchantress' fairy picking flowers,
and some dandy Grandie Girlies
who, for dad, were pouting prettily
Eyes shining with luminosity"

How delightful! You are so very clever!
Well done indeed~Hugs, Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

6 posted 2006-07-12 06:04 PM

Were all in agreement here. Very cleaver and wisely put together. Much enjoyed.

Hugs Kimberly

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2006-07-12 06:18 PM

oh Sheli

this sure made me smile

I'm glad you've found PIP
and I'm keeping this one in my library

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

8 posted 2006-07-12 08:23 PM

lol...[^_^]Very creative and entertaining.I myself am glad that I've found this site created by the great man that is Ron.

~J.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2006-07-12 08:50 PM

Cute one, much enjoyed. Something going on
here with muses...seems this must be muse
take a week off week....

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

10 posted 2006-07-12 10:27 PM

Aww, this is very awesome! Welcome to passions my friend! I am glad you enjoy this sight. I remember when I first saw it, I was awestruck. Muse all you like. I will be glad to read your words.

Kristabell

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

11 posted 2006-07-12 10:33 PM

Thankies for all your kind comments, y'all have given such inspiration

For years my lamenting muse was the only one hanging around, it's sheer bliss to be able to express thoughts not born of depression for the first time in what seems like a lifetime.

So, I wrote this to thank you all for just -- being.

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2006-07-12 11:12 PM

When we share this feeling...
it is mulitplied beyond planes, Sheli...

write on!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

13 posted 2006-07-13 12:19 PM

I find my muse here too Sheli. Thanks for this!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

14 posted 2006-07-14 02:17 AM

Much enjoyed, Sheli. I know exactly how you feel. I remember the first time I entered this garden of poets and the art, beauty and warm welcome I found from many, many poets who have become very good friends. I am here till beyond the day I die.

- Owl

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

15 posted 2006-07-15 04:17 AM

Cute and clever! Much enjoyed this......jo

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