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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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0 posted 2006-07-12 04:40 AM


Poem: Broken  
  (I copied this out of my blog and I am to upset to edit out the dashies, I apologize for the messy read.)

-I'm no good at anything I try to do,
and you don't even know.
-What my heart is going through.
I've tried and tried but I can't seem to get through.
-Theres a barrier in between,
and its bringing tears.
-I wish I could,
I wish you would.
-Maybe it would pull me through,
the pages turn and then they burn.
-As my heart hits the pit.
my heart is burned again.

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-07-12 09:32 AM


I understand


deasomnians
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since 2006-06-20
Posts 87
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2 posted 2006-07-12 02:53 PM


It may seem to you that you're not good at anything, but at least you're good at expressing your frustrations! So there's a start. Keep writing, it helps. And good luck to you.

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
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3 posted 2006-07-13 07:01 AM


Vulnerability sucks. I think I am really truly hurt.
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