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Eyes Closed
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Eyes Closed |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Eyes Closed If I close my eyes I can see more clearly My fingers stumble over the page and paint the picture of my mind. Colors meld into pastel rain bleeding to become one My eyes wiped clean by my lashes as they catch the drops not tears until they are wiped away and I, eyes closed, can see. If I close my eyes I can hear my soul better Clarity of my mind overwhelms me Echos of lost cries from my heart trapped in thoughts that cotton the white noise And I can see Colors pure Clashing until they dream Crashing into the hole they begin to fill. With my eyes closed I can see. aziza |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A wonderful poem here you have penned my friend, I enjoyed each word to the fullest. Well done aziza. Sincerely Rick |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I found a half written poem that I couldn't figure out where the inspiration came from, now I remember. I'm so glad you're having fun here! It's nice to get feedback instead of the silence we get other places, eh? *smiles* ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! Neat concept that passes through my own mind now and then but I never knew quite how to say it. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you. The feedback in here is amazing. Another amazing fact is how much is shared through the incredible poetry. I am loving meeing you all -- and I am thrilled to share this with you, Sheli. aziza |
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