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deasomnians
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since 2006-06-20
Posts 87
California

0 posted 2006-07-11 01:30 PM


Friend,
You said we’d be fine,
But I hope you realize
That neither of us is.

I know we can’t be more,
But I’ll never mean it
When I call you
Friend.

© Copyright 2006 deasomnians - All Rights Reserved
divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
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dancing 'neath the moon
1 posted 2006-07-11 01:32 PM


they don't always mean it when they say that
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2006-07-11 02:13 PM


deasomnians,
A friend is what they do not what they say.
Enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-07-12 11:13 AM


this touches
sweetberry
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since 2006-03-29
Posts 125

4 posted 2006-07-12 07:32 PM


Short and to the point.  Nice write!!!
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2006-07-15 12:52 PM


Nice writing...James
Kristabell
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Portland, OR
6 posted 2006-07-15 02:09 AM


Ah, I know the feeling... Nice write.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

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