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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon 
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A TV, computer, the internet 'zoo' A stereo, playstation and Everquest too All give me pleasure, just something to do To fill up my nights and sometimes my days while I deal with insanity and endless power plays These things don't define me, though part of my life They just entertain me, but if you'd care to look twice You, maybe, could see that there's much more to me than just the girl here in our virtual reality. I have joys and pain that sears if you'll look close there's substance here there's happiness and sorrow and sometimes tears anger and rage and child-like fear There's a store of love I cannot hide no matter how many times I've tried There's an evil tongue and razor sharp wit and humor sometimes shot from the hip There's a lover a fighter, and sometimes a whiner An aggressive, impulsive, and reckless designer A daughter, a princess awaiting her prince A cousin, a sister, and often a *witch There's a girl who feels pain like a blade through the heart A woman who loves, even when it's not smart a fighting spirit to withstand any test and an imperfect mother who just does her best A raving wench with lots of 'tude who sometimes can be slightly rude A gentlewoman, sweet and kind who always, always speaks her mind There's a hopeless romantic and sometimes a skeptic A frazzled lunatic whose life is hectic An independent woman and a needy little girl A sufferer of memory loss who's always in a whirl There's a plotter and a schemer A manipulator and a dreamer A therapist, a basket case A friend to few, one full of ?grace? Rough edged puzzle pieces leave this picture unfinished Understanding this female is mighty rough business Though you fit together the pieces as well as you can I'm an incomplete masterpiece in the palm of your hand. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sounds like we have much in common  enjoyed this and you very much... |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
thankies! I toyed with the idea of naming it "I'm schizophrenic and so am I" lol, that's how it feels sometimes, isn't it? glad you enjoyed! ~*Sheli*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loved this honesty write you are all that and no doubt even more |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am a fan of yours! I love this! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Great work. I kinda like you schizo. QoR |
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Angel_without_wings New Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 6 |
It was awsome thanks for sharing it. I'm new and hope to make new friends here. Patricia J. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Even rough puzzle pieces make a puzzle. Nice self analysis. Kristabell "If I have learnt anything, it is that life forms no logical patterns. It is haphazard and full of beauties which I try to catch as they fly by, for w |
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