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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Confessions Confessions in an Astro-dome Sessions on a path of cope This circle that I sail and roam With wooden oars the length of hope Confessions of a neophyte Sailing through this life of lure Passing through both day and night Tasting all this given tour With water, water everywhere And skies that change each daily scene With clouds on clouds of colors fair And winds that drag and sweep the preen I visit all the ports of call Test the best that I can be Trading thoughts of over all And adding all the best I see But time has grown some heavy moss And sapped my mind with heavy loss |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
this flows so easily from the tongue, 'tis lovely Thank you for sharing ~*Sheli*~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Find the right winds and tack your way to port Sy. Well written!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sounds like you've described Pennsylvania, aptly...  nice to see ya and read ya |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
There is a great rhythm to this description. Nice job. -Katie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"But time has grown some heavy moss And sapped my mind with heavy loss" But Sy..moss?..why all this time I thought you had a beard!  And your mind is as sharp as a tack. Loved today's offering!!  &  , Nancy.For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
divine chaos I often write about chaos, thank you for the read and comment. scorpio Thank you my friend. LeeJ Pennsylvania was one of my ports of call. LOL Thank you sweet. deasomnians I thank you for the nice job. Nancy WEll it looks like moss to me. Thank you sweet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awww, come on, Mr. T.! Where's the dirt? Is that the best that you can do in the confessions department?!? lol I thought I was going to read you dishin' 'n spillin' yer dirty deeds! LOL All joking aside, this truly is a remarkable write considering that your mind has been sapped with heavy loss. ~ NOT!!! Your delightfully sharp mind is a thing of beauty! ~ and an object of envy!  Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Looks like you've got a lady in every port. you lovely lovely man, you  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I don't think anything is wrong with your mind, Dear Seymour. I know you can sure write beautiful poetry. Of which, I thoroughly enjoy reading. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nothing like the light fading in our brains. Boy, do I know that feeling. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, Sy your mind moss is so cool |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, If if had been a bad boy, it's so long ago I have forgotten it. LOL But one of these days I'll dream up something for you. serenity, Only every other port, LOL but I'm working on it. SmartChick As long as you keep reading them and replying I'm happy. Barry, You have a way to go yet While I am approching the horizon. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun I use it as a matress. LOL |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Neophyte indeed, sir. This is from the pen of a seasoned sailor. The moss grows on your chin... nicely too. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Makes me want to take a cruise, Sy....and make some memories.  ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I thank you sweet lady. iliana What a wonderful idea. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*wondering how I missed this* I echo the above |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
an oar of hope, the length of pen, history's tales remembered when, voyages through mornings blue the heart of soul, the best of you  ~ Klassy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy, A classy reply, thank you dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Glad you found me, sweet reply. |
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