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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Sublime Perfection Do you wear sunglasses to filter the shine of my perfection? When you look in the mirror does my image remain, smiling back at you? How can you walk in the sun when my shadow is so great? I am sublime perfection. And you are lucky, you know? Why bother to speak, when I have already stated the truths? Your songs are nice, but pale when my clear soprano sings the lyrics of ......... me. When we dance, you float on the cloud of my grace. I am sublime perfection. And you are lucky, you know? I am the greatest affirmation of your ability to make an intelligent choice. I am the foundation of your love. I am the one who brings out the best of you. I am sublime perfection. And you are lucky, you know? aziza |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
ya know, I'm holding back SO many comments, so we don't hijack this thread and show everyone exactly how nuts we are lol .. I love this, it's just so .. you, almost queenly even *grins* Shel |
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deasomnians Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87California |
I love this. It's something I would say, so I'm glad I'm not the only one! haha. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza, You mean you are the sun in my eyes. LOL Enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, loved Sy's reply talk about positive self-image  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you all for enjoying this tongue-in-cheek poem. The answer to the lone question is a resounding yes! You just don't know it. (grins) |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
As is your poetry. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
This poem positively delights me aziza! Made me say... yes!!!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You all have thrilled me. Everyone of you. |
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