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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2006-07-10 09:13 PM


You are not alone here not at all,
I belong here BREAK MY FALL!
People try to break us down,
They end up wearing a frown.
BREAK MY FALL!
I'll be there to catch you,
And do everything I can do.
BREAK MY FALL!
You are not alone here not at all,
You've let me belong here...
BREAK MY FALL!
You're so cold but you feel alive,
It's amazing how we always thrive.
I am not alone here not at all,
Pick up the phone give you a call.
You always BREAK MY FALL!!!!
We are not alone here no not at all,
We have each other to BREAK THE FALL!!

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

© Copyright 2006 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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1 posted 2006-07-10 10:20 PM


It's always good to have someone break the fall.  Sounds like you have that person in your life -- I am glad.

aziza

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-07-10 10:27 PM


Excellent Kyle.
Everyone needs a safe place to land.
Well done.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-07-10 10:32 PM


very comforting to read

made me smile

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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
4 posted 2006-07-10 11:19 PM


Awesome write Snow.
Reminds me of that song from the 80's ... "nobody's gonna break my stride..la la la la laaa"  lol. Oh,no, now I will never be able to fall asleep.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-07-10 11:26 PM


Hi, Hot Flakes! You strike me as the sort of man who would act quickly to break another's fall as well!
May you both have soft landings!

Hope all is well in hell!

Giving you a big hug,
EA

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
6 posted 2006-07-10 11:32 PM


if only that were true but thanks
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