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Angel of my need
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Angel of my need |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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If you could give me peace of mind A hidden love inside to find If you could give my life intent Then you would be the one he sent If you would take and guide when lost Be my luck of fingers crossed Then you would be what makes me smile The drive within to go a while You would be the life we yearn The lessons that we slowly learn You’d be what gives our day its hope And levels out the steepest slope You’d be the angel of my need Be the love that prayers did seed You would be my strength and voice who gives me both, my life and choice |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and you, my friend, would deserve every bit of her  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Crucial to a woman’s poetic identity The mermaid of her form's life, is her philosophy of liberation… natural in flesh and spirit for man's purpose Sensitive structure unifies this lyrical integrity of the strength of passion relationships nurture... enjoyed this a great deal |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
That is a Beautiful Write. I hope you find the angel God will send to you. Keeep the faith and as soon as you quit looking she will pop up. Hugs Kimberly |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I like this one a lot, it gives me a kinda achy longing feeling Thanks for sharing~*Sheli*~ |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Another insightful poem and so up lifting. Now I some how think your not really talking about a woman in particular, your talking about what it is that makes you happy. whatever that may be for you or me... I loved it all the same Debo |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, thank you for again replying my friend, basically just looking for happiness and what might bring it, who knows what might walk through the fog for us to see and love. Dear Lee, great to see you again my friend, thank you for your words here and your time to share, it is always nice and remembered. Thank you for that. Hi Kimberly, thank you for this reply, I seek no longer but often wonder what might be and if oneday; the joy of daydreams. Good to see you here, again thank you. Sheli, lovely you could visit here and reply, the longing brings words and the words to me bring friendships and often exactly what I seek, thank you for this. Debo, you are very insightful and very correct, wonderful to see you here, happiness and its source will always be longed for and searched for, the mind is ever the traveler, day and night. To you all my friends, again thank you for your replies, each was heart felt and very much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Thanks for your reply James, good to see you here again. Sincerely Rick |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Ah, I would have to agree with Passing Shadows here. A beautiful picture you paint. Nice write! Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Kristabell, lovely to have you reply here my friend, thank you for your words and time, each was greatly appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rick~  Angelic deedsin time of need never fail in our avail of friendships found on flit of wing it is the joy that angels bring~ Someone as good looking as you are, would have NO TROUBLE hitching a ride on the wings of a love-angel~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is simply exquisite. aziza |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Passionately written Rick. Well done! believe in what your heart feels... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Marge, you are an angel yourself dear, thank you so much for these words, great to have your company today, be well and take care my friend till again we share. aziza, to you my friend, thank you, lovely to have you visit and read. scorpio, I do write straight from the heart, but sharing that is one of the great things of poetry or writing, to have poeple who listen and reply is a gift that can not be bought, so thank you so much for that. vandana, thank you, good to read your comment as well, have a wonderful day. To you all out there, agian thank you so much for being friends and replying, it is so greatly appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I will cross my fingers that the Angel of your needs finds you in health and then in love, heed. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A lovely reply my friend, thank you for sharing your time. Sincerely Rick |
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