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themute
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0 posted 2006-07-09 10:43 PM


Every moment is longer than you think
We are creeping at a lighting pace trough time
Tell me do you see truly where you are
Every second that passes me is a short infinities time
Do you not notice how long the seconds are?
We only see as humans what human eyes can see
But all the life around us is different from belief
Concentrate to feel your body in its state of being
Recognize that time is passing by
See the world that is too beautiful for your mind to know
For merely a moment and be happy
You have just seen more than most will see
Recognize life for what it is
And be conscious truly as one should be  


I am the two-toed wanderer

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-07-10 07:13 AM


wow! I love this! I'm in awe.
jody5
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2 posted 2006-07-10 10:02 AM


There is much wisdom in this poem.  Well said I liked it a bunch, Bravo!


Hugs Kimberly  


divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
3 posted 2006-07-10 10:08 AM


love it!  I'm quickly acquiring quite a taste for your work

~*Sheli*~

LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-07-10 10:30 AM


ripples upon ripples of unseen thoughts, energy pouring into the depth of soul

excellent

Serena
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since 2006-06-25
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5 posted 2006-07-10 07:25 PM


ah.. happiness does certainly lie in simplicity... and acceptance.
themute
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6 posted 2006-07-10 08:42 PM


somthing ive had in the back of my mind for years but i finally put it down spontainiously. i was playing guitar when i realized, funny.

I am the two-toed wanderer

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