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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2006-07-09 07:53 PM

graffiti of truth
on the world's walls

too often painted over
obliterated

whenever the message does not
suit the Kings and Queens
of Grace Land

but those with keen eyes
can still manage
to spiral thoughts beyond
walls of confinement

and someone paints
a Peace sign
larger than Life
in the open blue

a sign for aliens in the skies
that they might see and know
not all on this orb
suffer from analitis

and into the future
centuries
centurians shall move
within the constants
of centripetal forces

and we come back around again
to the same spot
holding onto umbilical chords
of understanding
which must come from within
the center of us,
the heart and soul
connected to
some sense of Oneness

and nothing less than centering
can keep us on target,
keep us from going off
on tangents
of doom

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-07-09 08:10 PM

"and we come back around again
to the same spot
holding onto umbilical chords
of understanding
which must come from within
the center of us,
the heart and soul
connected to
some sense of Oneness

and nothing less than centering
can keep us on target,
keep us from going off
on tangents
of doom"

Absolutely a profound write Kacy!
The ending made me want to meditate in a quiet room where the only sound is OM.

Hugs for this keeper, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2006-07-10 01:54 AM

Kacy for President! I love it! I hope you have had hundreds of children and that they have hundreds too and so on and so on and so on. If any one single person will get World Peace right, it will be you! Keep on keeping on. I am one of your followers!

- Owl

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2006-07-10 02:57 AM

Yes, Kacy for President! I love this, too and count me in.

....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-07-10 06:54 AM

awesome!!

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

5 posted 2006-07-10 10:20 AM

This was one of the unusual writes I have read. Having studied all the alians stories and being obducted myself In a dream I can relate to this exciting poem.

Hugs to you. Kimberly

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2006-07-10 05:46 PM

President Kacy. LOL. I'll be back to add another comment after running an errand.

ok, so now that the errand has been run and I am back in the presidential palace

I want to add, that the inspiration for this write was twofold:
my neverending POV of reality,
and a wonderful email message from 'Bodger'

if you get a chance to read, thanks Dave

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (07-10-2006 07:26 PM).]

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

7 posted 2006-07-10 11:40 PM

Everytime I read one of your poems I just love it. Awesome, WOW, Terrific,

Debo

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2006-07-11 12:13 PM

thank you Debo, what a kind comment! It put a big smile on my face.

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