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themute
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-07-09 02:03 AM

I have walked in the forest all alone
And for too long I have been but one soul
My eyes have seen the beauties of nature that no one sees
The dews white mist in the morning time that makes the grass grow cold
Or the fireflies in the dell with high grass that hold wind blowing forever it seems
They do dance so like stars in the night in the summer wind
Yet for all such beauties that never end I do wander for more
I wish for my one soul a two for I have no unity yet with nature’s soul
Though I wish to be one with her I have failed so many times
She is the elusive and complex she is the ever-changing constant
I do love to see her as a living breathing being
She does call to me at night when I am soon to dream
But alas she is too far away then for me to find her
So because she is so elusive I want a soul as close as mine to her
For she is the beauty that nature cant compare
And though the queen of the forest has the stars for me to gaze
Such a lovely has two eyes for me to stare and stare I do
For there is no texture in nature more soft than she but me
But I am not as graceful yet she is like the air
Though I see the sights of nature I see her more the apple
So sweet and ripe to me, the fruit of natures working
I seek to speak and live to meet this girl so beautiful to me
So in our walking in this forest we shall be two souls into a one
And with that two we shall fall into the soul of lady forest
So soon we’ll be the spirit too of beauty life and live forever
Life lived much like a stream a never-ending dream
That no string can ever tether

I am the two-toed wanderer

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2006-07-09 07:22 AM

this is so romantic! wonderfully written!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2006-07-09 07:47 AM

wonderful dreamlike quality to your writing

M

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2006-07-09 11:18 AM

Beautiful imagery and longing.

Love,
Margherita

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

4 posted 2006-07-09 11:37 AM

ya know, just .. wow.
awesome imagery
and soooo romantic

thank you for sharing
(and do you give romance lessons?
my guy needs them!)

~*divine chaos*~

The artist is nothing without the gift,
but the gift is nothing without work."
- Emile Zola (1840-1902)

zaz
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 26

5 posted 2006-07-09 11:49 AM

great images,enjoyed immensley

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

6 posted 2006-07-09 02:27 PM

thanks yall, dis be one o' mi favs now kuz i' so well riten. and cuz like i's got good wurds to. and cuz i's got alot of luv stuf in it. yea i think dats y i like it.

peace!!

I am the two-toed wanderer

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2006-07-16 02:36 AM

yore wurdz shor r purdy
n yore visnz ov natchur r devin
semz we met
bak n tym

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2006-07-18 12:56 PM

reading backwards I am
but that's me
for it's all a circle anyway
within a heartbeat
start to end
and back again

I love the soft romantic flow of this
and shall let it fly
alongside parts 2 and 3

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2006-07-18 04:09 AM

Enjoyed...James

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