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Open Poetry #38

longing

pmul76
New Member

since 2006-06-02

Posts 8

0 posted 2006-07-08 11:29 PM

I have known you for only few breaths
But that time intoxicated me with bliss

You’ve left me wanting
I dream of our first kiss

We parted in the dark
Now something is amiss

You went without a word
I long for your return

But my patience is running thin
And I am filled with desire that for you alone burns

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

1 posted 2006-07-08 11:34 PM

This is a keeper for me. I have felt this was so much when I was young. Thank you for bringing back memories. Standing ovation.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-07-09 12:25 PM

Especially liked the purity of verse here...simple, clear. The poem's layout sculpts a picture of innocense.
Nicely done.
TD

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2006-07-09 12:43 PM

sigh very good i know this too well

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-07-09 08:34 AM

very intense passion here! I love it!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2006-07-10 06:37 PM

Enjoyed...James

Serena
Junior Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 47

6 posted 2006-07-10 06:51 PM

thank you so much for sharing

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