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themute
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since 2006-05-08
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Maryland

0 posted 2006-07-08 09:13 PM


If I should forget you by the end
And my memories have lost your cute face
Then let my sadness now for then intend  
For notions of forgetting you so place
A bitter cold and dreary hearted tense
For no man in time can wish for such loss
And though I can’t foretell my future sense    
My feelings now are such I cannot cross
For I loved you once and I love you still
My love I love you, I love you vastly
Yet as for me my love you love me nil
And so my love I have stopped my asking  
As all loves do fade with time my flower
I’ll not forget you as proof this power  



I am the two-toed wanderer

[This message has been edited by themute (07-08-2006 11:42 PM).]

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jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
1 posted 2006-07-08 11:27 PM


I liked this one.  Great write.  

Hugs Kimberly


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2006-07-09 08:38 AM


outstanding!
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