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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Innocence What would a guilty person say if you were to take their past away. "Hey, things seem different now. Today seems to be innocent somehow." JamesLee 07July 2006 I can experience guilt only by living in the past. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes !!! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
hmmm.... Now you've got me wondering if I am guilty of anything... and believe it or not, but I guess we all are, to some extent or another. Your poem took a different turn with me... and it is a mirrored hall, it is. Well done, James. |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Great one James I like the part about only being guilty if we stay in the past. Debo |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Beauty in simplicity I enjoyed the read, thank you  Sheli The artist is nothing without the gift, |
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