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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-07-06 07:08 PM



When mourning doves begin to weep openly
and the moon hangs its head so low
it cannot be seen over the gingko trees,
when waves of madness escape their boundaries,
crush all that stands between them and desired realities,
when the sun refuses to shine no matter how hard I beg...
these are the times I seek solace in the sanctuary
of nature, drawn from cherished memory banks.

The soft melodic sigh of a gentle breeze
as it flows effortlessly
over sky reaching reeds in a teeming pond;
the warmth of sand grains slipping
at ocean's edge, seducing my toes;
scent of sage, night-blooming jasmine,
or lavender caressing my nose;
the chilled kiss of a forgiving fog blanket
as it settles on lonely lips of land
that line the shores of loon lake.

Listen, can you hear the sounds
of the night crawlers?
Did you see that flash of light
reflected from the beak of a bird?

Nature gives, and nature takes.
But I get to choose which memories to keep.

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-07-07 12:10 PM




"the chilled kiss of a forgiving fog blanket
as it settles on lonely lips of land"

Beautiful mood Kacy. You have chosen to keep some lovely memories.


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2 posted 2006-07-07 12:32 PM


Me too.
But I fear that there are too few such memories being recorded these days, to our peril.

Enjoy your work.

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3 posted 2006-07-07 12:37 PM


m'lady, thank you for that reply!

Krawdad, even for me, I find myself letting golden opportunities slip past my fingertips too often. Thanks for visiting with me.

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4 posted 2006-07-07 01:43 PM


I love your poem, Kacy.  Sometimes when I am walking through a nature reserve, or even driving through my suburb (which is a nature conservancy and has many indigenous trees in it), I feel there are just too many beautiful trees / branches / leaves / birds / animals / perfumes / textures / to take in all at once - and I SO badly want to - it feels to me that they are doing their best to do what they should be doing and nobody is noticing.

- Owl

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5 posted 2006-07-07 02:09 PM


Thanks, Owlie, and how wonderful that you are part of a nature conservancy! viewing the native vegetation daily is becoming such a luxury, worldwide.
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6 posted 2006-07-07 04:08 PM


Kacy~
This is just lovely ... you are pouring the ink of a magical muse~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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7 posted 2006-07-07 04:39 PM


Kacy~I echo Marge here.
Your writing it expanding in leaps and bounds.
This piece in particular is most excellent.
A keeper indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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8 posted 2006-07-07 07:32 PM


If we couldn't hear them before,
the night crawlers, I mean...
then we should be able to hear them now.

I like this muse on you.


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9 posted 2006-07-15 01:07 AM


I used to think that way...then some memories came back that I was wondering about...James
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