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Paradise1
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0 posted 2006-07-06 03:40 PM



As you stand outside
looking in, your wondering
what should I do
As you stand there
you are asking yourself
should I go through

Are you afraid
of what lies beyind that door
Are you afraid to take a step
through that door of opportunity

Standing there asking yourself
many questions
Then the door swings open...

              Will you enter?

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1 posted 2006-07-06 04:04 PM


Paradise~

Been at that doorway a time or two in my life ... takes courage to enter sometimes ... I'm pleased that I usually found it within myself~

Enjoyed your thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2006-07-06 05:26 PM


I myself am keeping my ears sharp for the slightest little creak of a door opening so I can make a mad dash

good write

Kielo
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3 posted 2006-07-07 12:55 PM


I too often lack the courage to enter, but I'm learning.

Thank you.

Adam

If you would be known, and not know, vegetate in a village; If you would know, and not be known, live in a city.
  - Charles Caleb Colton

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