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When Word-Whispers Come Without Warning

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Marge Tindal
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When Word-Whispers Come Without Warning
~*Marge Tindal*~

"Be still.", his spirit said.

"For you cannot follow
  where I have gone."

"Wait ... watch for the wind
  to curl around you
holding you,
  as I have held you
close."

"Feel my presence,
though I have flown
   far beyond your comprehend,
just beyond the reach of fingertips,
   beyond the seek of lips
that sought my own
  in passionately caressed
  moments of the past."

"Be still."

"For I will
  I will
return."

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Marge/sis...this got to my tear place.  
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absolutely beautiful
thank you for sharing
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MartieSis~
Well ... if I wasn't so amazed at the unexpected splash of ink ... I would find that tear too~

Sitting here working on some grandie girlie photos ... when his (whoever he is) came whispering the splash of words for me to pen~

At this moment in time ... I have no idea, no clue ... but, as things are meant to be ... so they are~

*sigh*

*Huglets*
~*Me*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Thank you, Lee~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com     

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Ah ha Marge! You had a poem attack!
This poem is amazing.
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Kate~
Feels like that ... and more~

Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Marge,

It's pieces like this that give poetry a good name. The fact that it was apparently a "lightning strike" just makes it all the more appealing.

A poem's just a poet in a word.

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Ned~
Thank you so very much for your thoughtful reply~
Hope you enjoy reading some more of my stuff ... goodness knows I have a plethora of muses that come and go at will~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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Marge...Such a gentle touching flow from your quill. Great write. Enjoyed very much...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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Ahhh, but whose will, Marge? Whose indeed. :-)

A poem's just a poet in a word.

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Paul~
Thank you so much ... you are always so kind to my poetry~

Ned~
Hmmm ?
Yes ... believe me, I know from whence you cometh~
I am, after all, devouring your web site !!!
Fascinating~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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Somewhere in time~


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Who knows how or why this happens Marge.
BUT when it does...grab your pen.

Love this~Nancy
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Beautifully wispered words, martyjo
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Dear Marge:  What a haunting piece!  It's such an otherworldly experience when this happens!

Love
Betty Lou

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Marge this is beautiful
Betty
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Thanks my friends ... for somehow I always know that you understand~

BettyLou~
Yes ... "It's such an other worldly experience when this happens!"

Exactly~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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'Cause
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