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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2006-07-06 10:41 AM

Night comes again
and daylight then-
I am shadows dusk till dawn
happy fading till it's gone

Night comes again
and daylight then-
I watch you fade away
as blue begins another day

Night comes again
and daylight then-
your kiss to me, so warm and deep
becomes snow-flurries in my sleep

Night comes again
and daylight then-
your touch and scent quick to stun
falling up against the sun

But darkness is for slumber
and shadows desperate near their end
boiling over or sinking under
my heart will never cease to wonder.

Night comes again
and daylight then.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-07-06 11:23 AM

But darkness is for slumber
and shadows desperate near their end
boiling over or sinking under
my heart will never cease to wonder.

Night comes again
and daylight then.

lovely, simply lovely

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2006-07-06 11:25 AM

"Night comes again
and daylight then-
your touch and scent quick to stun
falling up against the sun "

WOW! I am lost for words.
This is absolutely beautiful!
Love the picture too.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2006-07-06 01:34 PM

DixieDoodleGal~
This is just plain downright purtimous !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-07-09 10:31 AM

Oh, the beauty of quietness.
Loved this.
TD

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2006-07-09 10:42 AM

All of the above responses...
and more.
This is a core write...
and the right of rite.

Well done, Dixie.

zaz
Junior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 26

6 posted 2006-07-09 10:56 AM

the passage of the days,nice,the time machine came to mind while I was reading this poem.

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

7 posted 2006-07-09 10:58 AM

I've been wandering through these forums, reading and reading, there is so much talent here .. I finally just had to join, couldn't help myself

This piece is beautiful, I love it!

The artist is nothing without the gift,
but the gift is nothing without work."
- Emile Zola (1840-1902)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2006-07-09 11:23 AM

Dixie dear, passing shadows, you yourself are the interpretation of this beautiful piece of poetry, the alternating of day and night, bringing moments of deep awareness.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

9 posted 2006-07-09 03:46 PM

Dixie , you pen thoughts so excellently day or night

Hope

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

10 posted 2006-07-10 10:18 AM

I keep coming back to this one, so I'm adding it to my library now, it's been calling to me all morning. If it were a book, the page would be worn out by now

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2006-07-10 06:10 PM

Wow Dixie, this is a great write.

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

12 posted 2006-07-10 06:29 PM

oh my, this is exquisite...the repetition, the imagery...wow lady....wow

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