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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-07-06 06:57 AM





gentle summer rain


I have learned enough of pain


bring peace to my heart


©2006 by icebox

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-07-06 07:02 AM


Amen
Martie
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2 posted 2006-07-06 09:00 AM


icebox

If prayer is the wrong word for this, then it is something very similar.  

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3 posted 2006-07-06 09:16 AM


...a whispered wish.
such longing.
well done Sir.
Heart hugs, Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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4 posted 2006-07-06 03:26 PM


IceBox~
Seeking the peace is universal ...
knowing the peace is within~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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5 posted 2006-07-06 03:55 PM


So mote it be.




iliana
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6 posted 2006-07-06 05:48 PM


*smile*  This is such a peaceful thought: the gentle rain, no pain.
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7 posted 2006-07-16 02:51 AM


spirit+heart+soul=peace within
-spirit-heart-soul=pain  broken from outside
so words   his words  love peace  cannot
come together within
world of chaos lust and sin
destroys his soul that lies deep within

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

TinaTrivett
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8 posted 2006-07-16 08:43 AM


Beautiful...I love it.
zaz
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9 posted 2006-07-16 11:46 AM


short and sweet
divine chaos
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10 posted 2006-07-16 12:04 PM


this gave me a smile
I love rain, it always seems
to just wash everything clean
I'm never so peaceful as
when it's raining.

~Sheli~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2006-07-17 03:45 AM


Nice...James
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