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Sunshine
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0 posted 2006-07-05 08:46 PM



Palette Perfect

Mushroomed beige
loom my beginnings, exposed
in simple nudity,  you see me
situated before you,

living awaits me
in color
jeweled pigments soon  
adorn me
in spots and dots of
crimson
and cadmium lemon

streams of
manganese violet
silked with ultramarine blue
shall swath
my shoulders, while

cobalt teal and
antwerp blue titivate
my curves

windsor emerald shall
elevate status, as other tints
and blushes, shades and
traces come to call,

in their blendings and swirls
without regard of line
or context, paying no heed

soon, soon, my once pale
countenance is but a
congealed artifice

and naivety vanished

in black

perhaps it is best if I were
to stay in a state
of nudity by remaining
mushroom beige,
allowing you alone
to blush me
your favorite shade of
red


© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-07-05 08:53 PM


Karilea~
This one *smiles* me in vivid brush-stroked thoughts~

Clever .. clever~

*Huglets
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2006-07-05 09:15 PM


Sissie

Your pallet, a sensual delight of mushroom or color, is beautiful!!  

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3 posted 2006-07-05 10:22 PM


"perhaps it is best if I were
to stay in a state
of nudity by remaining
mushroom beige,
allowing you alone
to blush me
your favorite shade of
red"

OOOH!!!!  A new favourite from you!!!!!
I felt as though I were twirling and twirling
in soft shades of swirled silk.
Then the WOW sensual ending....yummy!
Off to show this one to Wiz.
Hugs YOU!!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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4 posted 2006-07-06 12:12 PM


Va-Va-Voom!  Heeheee...
Nice Sunshine!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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5 posted 2006-07-06 12:17 PM


I did love that last verse!

wonderful write that left me smiling

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6 posted 2006-07-06 12:22 PM


enjoyed the dazzling colors of you,
and the passionate poetic hue
'naked beige'

a passionate self-portrait

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7 posted 2006-07-06 02:18 AM


As our enchantress said. I also saw you swirling with multi colored silk scarves. Beautiful in all your womanhood and that
multifacted, captivating smile.  Cheers, martyjo

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8 posted 2006-07-06 09:21 AM


reminds me of a vase
being filled
with the ends
of flowers
slowly
on purpose

lovely

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9 posted 2006-07-06 09:28 AM


in their blendings and swirls
without regard of line
or context, paying no heed

soon, soon, my once pale
countenance is but a
congealed artifice

and naivety vanished

in black

perhaps it is best if I were
to stay in a state
of nudity by remaining
mushroom beige,
allowing you alone
to blush me
your favorite shade of
red

this was a mecca of mega colors of the stunning lady who wrote this...everything in moderation...class, intelligence and a lady with a style of her own

wonderful write

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10 posted 2006-07-06 06:04 PM


good read
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11 posted 2006-07-06 06:20 PM


Loved this, SIL!  
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12 posted 2006-07-07 08:41 AM


Sweet Femininity! I love it Sunshine! :-)
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13 posted 2006-07-07 12:27 PM


As usual, Sunshine creates her rainbow for us all to enjoy!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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just out of reach
14 posted 2006-07-07 02:00 PM


Ooooooh !! I'm with my sister on this elegant piece! Keepin' a new favourite!!
hugs, Chrislane

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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15 posted 2006-07-07 03:28 PM


What a beautiful painting
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16 posted 2006-07-07 05:28 PM


*smiling* oh that blush looks good on you......what a picture you paint
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