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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2006-07-05 10:04 AM


beyond the familiar four

Retaining essence of climatic notes
spooning words like flakes of snow
nature’s affection smiles jewels
magick etched on popcorn silk
assaulting, strong shades of hunter green
pouring through intervals of eternity

Golden flickers of light become dreams
planting weight on wicked stance
bobbing nightly breeze of return
haunting echoes flickering like the
wild eyes of a voice’s mind

whisper, the naked palm, turning upright
well dressed conversation sings
oh gauzy wings, that fingers trace
rolling leisurely across a threshold
awaiting swarming threads of sound

swan images seep between the toes of
astronomical cycles
becoming humanoides
freshwater reality
     blowing softly in the glimpse of stars
playfully they open
interstellar distances
of the celestial universe
wearing sandals of strangers

like an act of God making a visit
wearing the saffron robe of spirit
sculpturing a goddess in the
expression of arms
white blossoming petals
reflecting orbs

cascades across the arms of sea
of tanned skin, remembering
power of distance
swaying gently on wings of femininity
silky web of ocean hearts
consciousness of space/time
lapping over the olive skinned woman
encoding accents beyond dimensions
in the psyche of tao paintings

kind eyes of butterflies
constantly shifting sand cays
welcome reflective colors
where music floats through
like invisible tapestry
hung on the wall of
living entities

i wake realizing tomorrow afternoon
of some other life, inviting me…
i wondered of the flames of rooms
where fingers dance across rugs
of time without end
where chandeliers of light hang
across some universe yet to write
a whirlpool of western science





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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-07-05 11:10 AM


LeeJ
You would have to be a well read person to grasp the relative of all you have written.
Enjoyed and good morning sweet.

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2006-07-06 10:31 AM


"i wake realizing tomorrow afternoon
of some other life, inviting me…
i wondered of the flames of rooms
where fingers dance across rugs
of time without end
where chandeliers of light hang
across some universe yet to write
a whirlpool of western science"

I think your thoughts are swirling in that whirlpool  A multicolored swirl of beautiful thoughts.  Love this write, but this last verse pulled me into western science and your philosophy.  

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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