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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2006-07-05 07:42 AM


small talk wingery
like the gulls from anacapa
when they are tourists
just landing their shadows

I watched the sky of your mouth
making a horizon smile
strictly accidental
when some images occurred

or came back from memory
like a friend you could trust
with even made up secrets
and you recognized the afternoon

as one just before a night
that would be memorable
and now morning too
you say burns your skin there

but you don't mind my beard again
_____________


daark

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2006-07-05 07:47 AM


the beard feels good
long as i'm
bareback against you

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2006-07-05 07:54 AM


ms inky, thanks for your skinsere reply
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-07-05 08:36 AM


Your replies are as  delightful to read as are your poems~~

M

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2006-07-05 08:50 AM


when some images occurred

or came back from memory
like a friend you could trust
with even made up secrets

~*~

Recognizing the good stuff, are you?
Always a delightedlyfull read, you are...




LeeJ
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5 posted 2006-07-05 10:22 AM


or came back from memory
like a friend you could trust
with even made up secrets
and you recognized the afternoon


mystery always seems to swell over in your writing...

have a marvelous day

Martie
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6 posted 2006-07-05 10:24 AM


DS

"or came back from memory
like a friend you could trust"

An important yes!!  

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
7 posted 2006-07-05 10:26 AM


ms MMs, thanks lady friend

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ms sunshine, you make me smile with your replies, thanks

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ms leej, another of the days we both walk down yes? thanks for the read

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ms martie, bless you little neighbor lady, thank you for comming by

Klassy Lassy
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8 posted 2006-07-06 02:12 PM


I love smiles that widen the horizon, show the sun how to shine, the ones that own blue sky....
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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9 posted 2006-07-07 12:03 PM




"or came back from memory
like a friend you could trust
with even made up secrets
and you recognized the afternoon"

I love these lines Stranger.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
10 posted 2006-07-07 07:02 AM


ms kl, thanks lady friend

_____________

lady ms, stick around there are more
prying my mind, thanks ms

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