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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-07-05 06:43 AM



A Little Something

Searching for the right words
kneading that soothing touch of mind
trying to remember the realness of
wondering when time will reach out
and dress me in you~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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iliana
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1 posted 2006-07-05 07:08 AM


A cool little something!  
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2006-07-05 08:29 AM


Thank you, Jo. Hope your 4th was a happy one~~


M

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3 posted 2006-07-05 10:12 AM


Have you gotten into cross-dressing?  Besides, my clothes would simply HANG on you and I KNOW my boots wouldn't fit  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-07-05 12:02 PM


sweet write
LeeJ
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5 posted 2006-07-05 01:13 PM


whoa....really enjoyed this
Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2006-07-05 01:17 PM



I really enjoyed your "little something" here and I really liked the word choices that you've made and especially the use of the word kneading...

Again, enjoyed reading.


-Bob

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