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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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Virginia

0 posted 2006-07-04 01:00 PM



With the calculative
and discreet rearrangement
of the walls that make up
the chambers of the maze,
lab mice roam about
with only a slight sense
of being enclosed, entrapped.
The Grand Experiment
continues to prove to be
successful, profitable.
Praise the Colonies
of mice who run
on the Giant Wheel
celebrating their freedom!
    
            *
2006 Larry F. Leake

© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-07-04 03:03 PM




Wow!

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
2 posted 2006-07-04 03:33 PM


Wonderful read.

Happy 4th of July.

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-07-04 07:39 PM


grinning  here
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2006-07-04 07:44 PM


At least this mouse
is in a house
where the cheese is varied.



Thanks, Larry!


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-07-04 08:00 PM



  

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2006-07-05 02:04 AM


I like it!
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