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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2006-07-04 03:22 AM

This morning
was a port wine stain
the sun in roil
Waterford
and there were prints
of hungry lips
in coral on the brim.

They told stories
inbetween
of lines that never
should have been
like ladies eager
for too much
blotting
lust in riverbeds
of all the lies of
the eclipse
that dread
their eagerness for fill

hungry

for the whisp of scent
bending necks
inviting

--itch -

laughing as she bled her bliss

pupils

darklings

in dilate--

satiated; dead.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2006-07-04 04:27 AM

I don't know, but I keep getting an image of sunrise over the wetlands when I read this, Ser. It's very moving. *hugs you*.....jojo

[This message has been edited by iliana (07-04-2006 05:19 AM).]

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2006-07-04 06:17 AM

Serenity' why I read and fail to reply: I see debauchery ~~ Whether pertaining to some past or recent scene, the spoils of Katrina or the political atmosphere in NO, I do not know.I may be way off base. But wanted to let you know,I read all you post. You sure do set a mind to swirling. lol martyjo

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2006-07-04 07:09 AM

...uh HUH, well, it was always true that absinthe makes the heart grow fonder.

*smile*

nicely done/

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2006-07-04 02:14 PM

I get the biggest kick out of the replies you always get. Heck, I just see a sunrise, and wondered what time it was?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-07-04 07:43 PM

lol, I see
renoir
taste wine,
and whine

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

6 posted 2006-07-04 08:56 PM

They told stories
inbetween
of lines that never
should have been

i especially loved this part...very well said

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2006-07-04 11:30 PM

It is so obvious now that I read it again. But, hey -- I still think of another Tequilla Sunrise....lol.....watch out for that sunrise...lol! ....jojo

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2006-07-06 04:27 PM

Can I play too? *laughing*

I was just picturing the morning ritual of a lady I used to know--whatever bled through the lines is just fine too.

("She" is no longer with me anymore, and that is a very good thing.

)

Thanks so much for reading, with love to all.

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