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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 678


0 posted 2006-07-03 01:29 PM



if we were to "kick push, kick push, kick push, kick push"

                         and coast

could we sail to  Lupe Fiasco's where sausage and french toast

            could be inspiring us to toast

to our good fortune in gaining the opportunity to peacefully debate whether or not the Poconos or a California coast

would be the best vacation spot to help us appreciate the friendly ghosts

                              of our past



                                                                          love,

                                                                          howard





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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-07-06 12:40 PM


"peacefully debate whether or not the Poconos or a California coast"

That would be a hard choice.
Great write, howarsdtsu.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

ChaoticHazeLight
Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 71
California, U.S.
2 posted 2006-07-06 01:47 AM


I like that song...
"Two lovers intertwined with nowhere to go."

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