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Zara14 Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 11Northen Ireland |
over the top we go with are hearts in are mouths and guns on are back the genrale shouting for us to hurry we reach no mans land running trying to win it over shoting what ever and who ever we can with bulits flying everywere and bodys on the ground rain betting down on us we battle on when the fightting is over there is a smell the smell of death friends familly and others laying around you dead you lay there wishing you were too in the hospital tent there is a horrible smell and crys of the wonded docters and nurses runnig around trying to help they come to you laying half dead and tell you your friends are dead you ask to be killed to spare the pain but they do not wish for you to be killed once your healed its out again over the top and at last BANG BANG your dead Z.mcmillan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
sad, that so many have died within such reality war sucks but this is a good write! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Lot of action here... so much sadness. Nicely done Zara. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A true picture of the sadness there. Thank you |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Fodder for the Politicos and the Generals. A waste of energetic youth, and then the old and the children too when the war goes badly. |
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Zara14 Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 11Northen Ireland |
glad you like it i thought iit would be good to do a tribute to all who lost there lives and there family's Z.mcmillan |
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