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Another's kiss....
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Another's kiss.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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. You walked into her lips kissed mine though I stood behind you...dry and I wondered when you turned gazed at me could you see your kiss upon me? . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Whooooo! I don’t know how he could not see! Unless he was blind…  A beautiful poem. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow! Dear Nancy, this is brilliant! As we mirror the truth to each other, he might have seen! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nancy, This was brilliant, so unique and so inspiring. Applause dear lady. TD |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Excellent, and I am sure it happens!! martyjo |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
It seems that the man is thinking about another woman, and it is obvious to the speaker of the poem. Anyway, I really like. PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Interesting concept Tinker. Kissing through osmosis. Magic in your pen today. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang! That fellow doesn't have a clue, does he! Wonderful....and... sharp! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is fantastic. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Enchantress, this one kisses to the quick. Very effective write, dear girl. I like the power in the brevity! Saved ~ Klassy  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wonderful Nancy - love those kisses - Paul |
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Poetic Concept Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 66God's Fingerprint |
You walked into her lips kissed mine though I stood behind you...dry and I wondered when you turned gazed at me could you see your kiss upon me? ummm...I think that there are many interpretations for this, for I have came up with about three, but the one that made most sense to me was that u were a girl on the side, that (SP) desepertely wishing to be the main female. wondering if he realizes how much u actually love him making kiss a metaphor for love...anyways good job keep writing. Return the favor on A Poet...A Pen "How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Always such great replies and I thank you all~ *Poetic Concept you hit it right on!* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GiftedLady~ The scene came to life ... this poetess loves this .. and you~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn, love this - sharp and powerful words.... Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
i am not so sure about this one nancy I need to try one of those kissess to see if it is accurate arthur |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
WOW !!! Awesome Teed. luv & Miss Ya !! |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
I have commented and read comments on this poem -- I think Poetic Concept is right. You are "the other woman." PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
What a thought....very creative!  sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Beautiful Nancy, makes me think of the Rolling Stones tune Angie.:-) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
The longing we have all felt. Nicely turned! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your kiss is most potent in its wistfullness upon the imagination |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Well..I like it...very much and don't even think it needs an explanation or to be explained.  M |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
My word, Nancy, this is a wonderous write! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Many loving kisses of much appreciation are sent your way my poetess friend. -Bob |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh! Perfect! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Thank you all once again!~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy...sorry to be late to this....I have felt just this only couldn't say it. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
outstanding!!! so happy I was given the gift of reading this.... thank you |
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