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Debo
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0 posted 2006-06-30 01:48 AM


As the days go bye,
She fill's your mind with lies.

Building the walls that
Will soon surround you.

When the last brick
Is placed
She will leave you
To face the truth
Alone again...

Debo

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1 posted 2006-06-30 02:08 AM


Very sad and lonely feel....

sky

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Debo
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2 posted 2006-06-30 09:05 PM


Thanks Skyshine for that toughtful reply.
Yes it is sad when love blinds you until it's to late and they are already gone...

Debo

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