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lokiwolf Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 31 |
seed in rich dark earth growing,reaching for the sky smooth silvery bark water flows over exploring dark crevices shaping the pebble stars litter the sky flickering,disapearing as hopes and dreams die a great rushing roar your mind is taken over by the waterfall |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
More great artistry with the 17 syllable form, but a question: what makes the first two, especially the first one, senryu rather than haiku? Great poems in any case. PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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lokiwolf Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 31 |
well from what I have heard in haiku you have to give some clue as to the season, this is what my teacher told me |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
It's my understanding that haiku is about nature. Senyru can be about any subject. This is very good in any event. I love senyrus!! |
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lokiwolf Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 31 |
I find them easy and fun to write so I love them too. |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
I think senryu deal with humanity in a sarcastic or ironic way. PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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