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themute
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0 posted 2006-06-29 12:51 PM



I can hear the thunder roaring as I’m lying in my bed
I can’t sleep because the warring that goes on around
I can see the endless mountains that are stretching far and wide
I can’t climb their frigged peek for it’s too tall for me to reach my sullen pride
I’d rather falter as I’m climbing than to reach the top alive fouled by foolish pride
And to never understand

Too much hard times I find them in the days without friendship or family
And yonder I hear the trees they whisper words to me they say they’re dying
And as I clamor to set free my mother who is sad for all the pain I pushed on her
Says its better safe than to be sorry and I realize how late my actions are
It’s a funny thing belief so strong without relief at all for anyone
But you can never see you’re blinded by deceit that fills your eyes with hoping
And in days that come and go you will never know that you are dying
Your understanding in belief is that our human race will never end
But all races have a start and finish line my friend
And so you must accept that this race is sure to cross that line with time

So come along with me and we will cross a sea
The endless waters that are poisoned will be revived once again
And in our times of sloth incompetence we ride for nothing
And standing on a beach we watch the tide sink in until it’s gone away
Never to return like the ambulance

Too true is that this governed land of sin was once with god
But its now on the side of a devil of neglectful pokes and prods
That lead us to an endless dawn
Our mothers taught us well but our fathers taught us nothing
And so now we only have but a fear of what is strong
And a tendency to see an evil but submitting to its grasp
Oh no what will show when the children have learned absolutely nothing?
Watching on TV a joking man is mocking what is serious
And they laugh and they joke as if they understand the world is not crying
But the children of the home do not seem to grow or know the earth at all
Oh what a generation to be living in because we’re not at all  


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-06-29 12:57 PM


wow! I think this is the first time I've read you...this was a very interesting piece, so many good lines...the theme is outstanding


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