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The May Poem
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The May Poem |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 it really doesn’t matter… the warming time, until May becomes a rose February, March, April will spring through the snow but when May comes so does the Rose. She emulates me in quick spring time fresh lovely full quickened bloom’d then I would do her well to take her in allow her, fully watered, to spring back a bit but as in all life, she is gone now, past her prime until the cooler days of September. She just might return. Remember? Those days that will bring spring back to visit with a last glorious… but only if the rains are right, and just before the December moon. You loved June…the time of dolphins. Thank you for looking over me now. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is not only truly beautiful, it is also extremely touching...unforgetable... Well done dear friend... perhaps the rose will return again and again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Delicate, lovely..melancholy. I love it!! Hugs~Nancy Don't bring me down now, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
With your beautiful words you have offered her a touch of forever. Love, Margherita |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Writers like you.....simply make me glad that once upon a time, I learned how to read. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there is no step-by-step receipe for falling into and out of...and yet so humbly and fitting, you create a unique language of love, certainty that in the rose are interesting details that one can understand, the Rose my dear is so trustworthy and dependable, and she will return, year, after year after year, she did so, before out time and will do so, after our time, as evidence of our poetry and hers... astounding write Love to you |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
WOW! Awesome. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ To say 'I like it' is sooooo insufficient ... it sings a song that my heart knows so well~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Karilea! I'd love to have some roses again. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
She will return again and again, alwayz sweet lady.... It's sooo very nice to see you!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what a beautiful write softly remembering the scent of another's heart |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Gentle, and so soft these words. Lovely. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Such delicate beauty as the rose requires such perfect conditions. If only we, the human race, would all allow these perfect conditions for all of our fellow humans, I am sure far more humans would bloom into such beauty within and without, as our Sunshine. Enjoyed every syllable/image/thought/memory of this. - Owl |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a rose is true beauty My spirit will rise |
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