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lokiwolf Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 31 |
hidden flare of life a wisp of grey smoke floats high escaping defeat great burning desire why always striving for more when we have it all glowing emeralds the only light in the dark the eyes of a cat no friends in this life black cat stalking the shadows that he has become these are 4 senryus of mine, they do not go together. I hope that you like them. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
To be a pro in prose You are way too young But you are a highly gifted youth... Excellent senryus.  JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
glowing emeralds the only light in the dark the eyes of a cat enjoyed though I do miss my Sugar~~~ Nicely done M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lovely senryus. The time spent in school offers treasures of knowledge to make you fligh high  Love, Margherita |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
I am impressed, especially with the second a third. The second brings me Buddhist thoughts; the third is such a clear image. PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
excellently written and presented...great job! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I loved the second one, but all were good! |
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