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In the Black and White of It
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In the Black and White of It |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The sweat drips off the words the lengths one goes to disappoint as I tie down my broken wings wondering how long the heal will take pages bleed to me with half-a-heart-thoughts trying to find my place in the humidity of life another thought to another thought attaching themselves smearing the glow from an almost yesterday past the point of it, the losing that is, where the coming down from the high leaves silent pain and the birth of what might have been once again drains the fade into a nothingness to become the norm under the eaves of my mind the attack of sorrow takes place clinging like those bats in backward exposure body weighted by care death always imminent secrets on a blank page waiting to taste it through the pen of another He pecks at the window waking me from the restlessness that invades now bugging me by those he catches while I wonder the next and play devil's advocate sinking too deep in the damp I let the sweat drip off my words tired of playing the same old tunes holding onto an emptiness unfinished... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this gives me kind of a hopeless feeling in my gut I hope for you more fulfilling days my friend |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
extremely good writing and visuals, loved this especially.... He pecks at the window waking me from the restlessness that invades now bugging me by those he catches while I wonder the next and play devil's advocate whoa wishing you a great day and sending along a hug  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"under the eaves of my mind the attack of sorrow takes place" WOW! Vivid. Love this line. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Dixie, LeeJ and Jl... some days are just black and white with no color to brighten the day~~  M |
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