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Zara14
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since 2006-06-27
Posts 11
Northen Ireland

0 posted 2006-06-27 03:42 PM



You’re the one I love
The one I love forward to each day
Who makes my laugh so hard I cry
And gives me that twinkle in my eye
You light up the darkest Room
And soften the Hardest Heart
But now you’re gone
You leave an empty space
And bring tears to my eyes
I don’t know how to live with out you
Because you’re the one love

My smile has gone
My twinkle too
The love of my life I will remember you
In days to come I will think about you
In Years to come I will still talk about you
When I met you again high in the sky
I will rejoice and sing and celebrate
Because you’re the one I love

Z.mcmillan

© Copyright 2006 Zara Mcmillan - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2006-06-27 03:55 PM


Hi Zara, Welcome to the blue pages....a heartfelt post....

please check your email for a pip greeting


Greeneyes~

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

Zara14
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since 2006-06-27
Posts 11
Northen Ireland
2 posted 2006-06-27 04:02 PM


thank you
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2006-06-27 07:58 PM


Nice writing...higs...James
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-06-27 10:24 PM


welcome aboard!

Lovely first post here.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2006-06-27 11:07 PM


"My smile has gone
My twinkle too
The love of my life I will remember you"

Nice to have that to hold on to.
I know the feeling.

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
6 posted 2006-06-28 08:07 AM


Heartfelt first post Zara.
Welcome to Passions.  It's a pleasure to write with you.
TD

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

7 posted 2006-06-28 08:37 AM


welcome to PIP and thank you for the bittersweet and lovely write
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

8 posted 2006-06-28 08:38 AM


welcome to PIP and thank you for the bittersweet and lovely write
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