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FiercestCalm
Junior Member

since 2006-06-24

Posts 31
michigan

0 posted 2006-06-27 12:52 PM

something beckons
liquid *diamonds
seep through the places i crack

soaking my soul
washed clean
newborn tears f
               a
                l
                 l like salty rain

as they hit the dirt
i lie still
mind wandering

the escape exists
in a hidden box
of memories long forgotten

the queen's lace curtains
billow out
(to somewhere)

i wrap myself in satin dreams
i can not recall
what brought me .here.

this urge to melt
into the earth
s  c   a   t      t    e    r      e     d

like the leaves that blow across my body

in my mind's eye
i see myself clearly
for the very first time

"You can do no great things, just small things with great Love."~Mother Theresa

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-06-27 02:43 PM

amazing read and write...

very much enjoyed...

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2006-06-27 03:17 PM

This seeped through the cracks you made in my poetry-thirsty soul and surged to every pore of my skin and quivered and burst through them and flowed back into the ether from which it came. Loved the visual poetry splashes too. Excellent! Please post lots.

- Owl

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2006-06-27 05:07 PM

The cyclic affirmation of seasons and dreams
Pour and fill creations schemes
Of Autumn, where the air is clear

To hold myself in yearned endear...

Loved the feeling of the leaves.

TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-06-27 06:56 PM

the format is awesome, as well as the theme! Love this!

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

5 posted 2006-06-29 07:39 AM

Oh wow what a lovely write. First I've read of you but certainly not the last.
much enjoyed!
~ cheye ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2006-06-29 08:52 AM

Refined poetry that leaves a pleasant sound echoing within the heart.

Love,
Margherita

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2006-06-29 09:13 AM

I'm a fool for ecphrastic poetry.....dunno what there is about it, but if the words look like what they're talking about, I'm in hawg heaven!

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2006-06-30 07:17 PM

It can be a shock to see ourselves clearly...James

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2006-06-30 07:34 PM

wow
enjoyed this third eye peek

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