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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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when you were in lady skin did you kneel at the whisper tree did your eyes water like dew wet as you bathed in imagination did you feel the smooth stones there under the nonchalant where your knees were slow to run and your hands glued to prayers you spoke of demons and your hunger to mouth their names in rhymes to press them into your wound til the healing is ruined again you wore begged liquor on your lips and your fingers were painted til they were gloved drunken but still you favored the dark with secrets of white modesty _____________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
very quiet heat.... enjoyed this, DS. Thank you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
when you were in lady skin did you kneel at the whisper tree did your eyes water like dew wet as you bathed in imagination ....oh yes, a thousand times.... did you feel the smooth stones there under the nonchalant where your knees were slow to run and your hands glued to prayers yes, prayer of thanks for the moment you spoke of demons and your hunger to mouth their names in rhymes to press them into your wound til the healing is ruined again welp, some of us tend to feel we need to self persecute....guilt I suppose you wore begged liquor on your lips and your fingers were painted til they were gloved drunken but still you favored the dark yes, b/c no matter how dark, when the light comes, it comes two fold...stonger, clearer with secrets of white modesty What? oh, you didn't write this for me????  Silly me...and here I was so wrapped up in each and every word... thanks for the morning brillance.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend ___________ ms leej, for the eyes of your mind yes, thank you for the music of your review |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just brilliant! Loved this one. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
smooth vermouth going down with a twist i like it when i sip you down slow |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
You certainly have a way with words Stranger. I like your way. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms myst..thanks for the eyes on my words ____________________ ms inky, you are so good when you speak of liquor _______________________ lady ms, I enjoy your eyes on my offerings, thanks to you |
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