Wouldn't Bleed (Older Poem)

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Open Poetry #38

Wouldn't Bleed (Older Poem)

Serena
Junior Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 47

0 posted 2006-06-26 08:43 PM

Written: April 17th, 2001
Title: Wouldn't Bleed

Do not speak the thought of a thousand words,
Until you follow the line as it twirls,
And spirals down to the ground,
Where a begger is bending and it's found,
Picked up then carried away,
Where it can wound someone else today,
The thought of a word meant for me,
Given away, I warned you, you see?
Turned and broken, it's falling apart,
I thought I told you to be careful with a heart,
Which is burning, and falling, and left out,
Please don't cry, or look away, no doubt,
There is no doubt in my mind now,
As you turn to leave, none at all I plead,
That you left me because for you I wouldn't bleed.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2006-06-26 08:51 PM

Nicely put...sometimes they want too much,
got to have that power....sometimes they
fail....hooray for ya... Strong thoughts
within...well said!

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

2 posted 2006-06-27 12:46 PM

Very nice. Much enjoyed.

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Serena
Junior Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 47

3 posted 2006-06-27 12:29 PM

thank you both for your words <3 your thoughts are appreciated.

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