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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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white leaves, dead under the apple tree. her papers are burned, crisp at the edges. mine torn. Imperfect little squares. Think skin, dry bones. It’s lonely under the apple tree where we cry for hours. Stretch out in dead secrets- little documents ruined for the sake of privacy. ----------------------------------- hullo all. I'm back for another short visit. I dunno, I kinda like to drop in once a month or so. Don't really have the dedication to writing it takes to stay. I changed my picture, seeing as I'm 17 and that was me when I was 13 u_u it doesn't show much of my face, but then again, I prefer it that way. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The emotion in this poem reminds me of times in my life when I felt shattered...Very powerful and moving....*big hugs* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Stretch out in dead secrets- little documents ruined for the sake of privacy." Heart-breaking. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed. ~Jesus Christ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It's great to see you posting again Wind. I knew I was in for a special read when I saw your name, and I was correct. Extremely powerful writing Liz. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, what we do for that privacy sometimes good to read you again |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have been missed. I think this is a superbly crafted poem. Your choices of words is masterful. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thanks, guys ^_^ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 good to read you again |
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