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Your Candle
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Your Candle |
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I Am Anonymous New Member
since 2006-06-26
Posts 3 |
I light the wick... Look into your eyes, so far away. Memories of your lips. A puddle forms in the wax. My face turns pale; white as the candle just lit. The sides fold in. Stomach churns. All too familiar. Bead of wax, drips so slow. Memories of your arms wrapped around me. Holding you as you slipped away. A warm breath, the light flickers. The brief extinguish reflecting in your eyes. For just a second, you're here with me again. The flame, now stable, burns steadily for you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome to PiP~ The imagery in this piece is lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I very much enjoyed your entrance post. Looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome So very beautifully written. TD |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Strong, very strong. I felt the loss in this the last breath the dying of the light. excelent Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Dylan Thomas I went to the desert on a horse with no name, it felt good to get out of the rain. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Heart wrenching and powerful in the vision you create and the feelings your words evoke....*big hugs* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice poetry! JL  |
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Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
::claps:: very nice |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A scent of jasmine just filtered itself through the open window, and I thought I caught the flicker of a candle flame as I read this. Welcome to these poetry pages. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcoming you to Pip, enjoyed your first post, and will look for more..... please check your email for a special greeting Greeneyes~ And so it those we live with |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Welcome to PiP! I hope you enjoy your time here. Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
An absolutely wonderful entrance post to Pip. I enjoyed your words and will be looking forward to reading more. Welcome to Pip, I hope you enjoy your time here. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've caught the eyes of a poet in wonder of a photo while lighting a memory quite well. Welcome to Passions. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful welcome to Passions |
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I Am Anonymous New Member
since 2006-06-26
Posts 3 |
Thank you all for your comments and making me feel welcome. |
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