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On The Morning Stage
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On The Morning Stage |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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On The Morning Stage ~*Marge Tindal*~  I could not write the garden without the beauty of the triple coral Hibiscus that I have come to love~ It is my belief that she stays up all night preening for the staging of the early morn of sunlight~ She blooms in perfect wonder knowing that her plight is to fold her petals gracefully at the come of twi-of-night~ But, oh how she dances in petaled Tu-tu of her making when she knows so very well her morning photo I'll be taking~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful bloom she is too Marge! Lovely lovely. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Your garden is just beautiful, Marge. As well as this flower. Thank you for sharing your lovely garden with us. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ahh, I see the beauty. Thank you so much, Marge. I was just thinking how bogged down I have become with must-do's and future planning...I just seem to be missing the mark when it comes to seeing the beauty of one moment...one moment captured on the stage of morning. Thanks again. Love, Patricia |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Oh how beautiful. Betty |
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Poetic Concept Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 66God's Fingerprint |
This is a very safe poem, I think u should try to expan a little further out stretch the ideas of a garden, I loved the smooth, carefree mood in which the poem was centered, but at the same time I like different...but regardless about what I am talking about or how I feel about originality I still "adore" this kind of work...good job...elevation is the key "How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Margie, this was stunning.... |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I can just see her staying up all night, making sure she looks "just so" for her modeling session! This is very cute, Marge. You have quite the imagination! I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Absolutely stunning...I can see why you have come to love it so much...simply beautiful...*big hugs* |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Marge, She is absolutely gorgeous! All dolled up in her Sunday go to meeting dress! I love it. Want it .. need it... Wish she were mine.. martyjo |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent!!  JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis One of my first dates....Hibiscus behind my ear and lots of petticoats...you reminded me. Going up north for my son's wedding...see you when I get back on the 4th.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
MT, you have me smiling...a beautiful flower and a beautiful penning from a dear lady. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Your garden is a little piece of Eden! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a wonder this flower, you honored its beauty in a very captivating way, dear Marge! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Such a beauty, Marge! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
your work always delights |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you ALL dear people~ The Florida garden *gifts* this poetographer~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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