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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2006-06-26 08:49 AM



Lip Sync

What quantifies your mind,
Does not qualify you lip,
Centurian

For my ego shall not break
Upon the drool of men

Nor am I clay,
To form within your cryptic touch

I am new

Unique, the element that you pursue

And though, the blush of inexperience reprise
Put forth in such foreboding eyes

Thy Lady’s heart cannot be broken
For poetry is the soul

Copyright Kkh 6/26/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-06-26 11:38 AM


ThisDiamond
It reads like a Dali painting. Enjoyed

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2006-06-26 11:46 AM


"For my ego shall not break
Upon the drool of men"

I have a list of things I'd like to do before I die--and a list of things I'll never do in case I don't die...

and "the drool of men" is on both of 'em.

*laughing*



Seriously tho, this is a different style than I'm accustomed to, but I think the cut against the bias suits you beautifully.

Always a pleasure m'friend.


LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-06-26 11:47 AM


gotta agree with Sy...adding, terrific!!!!
ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2006-06-26 12:22 PM


Thank you for your replies here...to this inspired write.

"Elevation is everything", I have heard...and I am trying on some new clothes!

Returning a grin, and a hug.
Enjoying the humor in a new outlook.
TD

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2006-06-26 01:08 PM


"For poetry is the soul"

And TD you are poetry!
Great write.

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

passing shadows
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6 posted 2006-06-27 05:50 AM



SmartChick
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7 posted 2006-06-27 07:06 AM


This is fantastic. You keep trying on those new clothes, until you find just the right fit.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2006-06-28 06:23 PM


Laughing at your elevation~~~

my ego shall not break
Upon the drool of men

Nor am I clay,
To form within your cryptic touch

I am ...

Unique,

and I love that...it is enough for me

M

( don't believe everything  that is written...you are high on my list)

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