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Dark Stranger
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West Coast

0 posted 2006-06-26 07:19 AM


turning back the pages
of a new day book
I watch your eyes
looking for the special one

your fingers, nervous pedestrians
crossing the line
pretending those feelings
aren't really busses

with cafe mouthed strangers
that have gone without meals
pressed in between the leather
of snug fitting seats

just waiting for permission
to ooze onto your sidewalk skin
with the profanity of their innocence
like explorers retaking the lands

of a vague songed premonition


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daark

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-06-26 07:29 AM


just waiting for permission
to ooze onto your sidewalk skin
with the profanity of their innocence
like explorers retaking the lands

of a vague songed premonition

been there, felt that...and very well described, but then, your the master of imagry...



Morning D.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-06-26 07:31 AM


ahh Lee stole my favorite part...
you always can touch with  your words,

M

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-06-26 09:23 AM



My eyes love to play tricks
until your words do
and the cat 'o nine
gets left out

but I saw Cats this weekend
so purred throughout
the lovely songed sail...



thank you...

purrrrrrrrrr


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-06-26 09:46 AM


ms LeeJ thanks lady friend.

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ms MMs, you make me smile with your touch

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ms sun, spank you very much kitty friend

Martie
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5 posted 2006-06-26 10:20 AM


DS

I always look forward to your new day poems!  

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-06-26 10:40 AM


ms martie thank you so much

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2006-06-27 08:56 PM


i like the ooze

feels like you're looking up my dress

The Lady
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The Southwest
8 posted 2006-06-27 10:33 PM





Does this seem sensual or is my imagination playing with me?


Dark Stranger
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West Coast
9 posted 2006-06-28 07:23 AM


ms inky...it would be my pleasure to look
thank you lady friend

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lady ms, all things in this world are sensual for some of us..thanks for your thoughts

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