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Paradise1
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since 2006-06-23
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Illinois, United States

0 posted 2006-06-25 06:17 PM


A child can be happy cause
they got A's and B's on their report card
graduated from middle school, high school
and college.

A child can be sad cause
a family member couldv'e passed.

A child can be mad cause
a person they call a friend
hurt you or betrayed you
and didn't apologize for it

A child could feel confusion
on whether "following the crowd"
is cool and you already know it's wrong
Being a lone-wolf is the best
thing in the world
avoiding all the boys and girls
who will be working at your feet
cause you did the right thing  
and became successful.

A child can't feel any of those
if a ignorant person
can't keep their paws off a gun
shooting at another over
money and drugs
and it just so happens a stray
bullet can't keep away from a innocent child
whose caught in the middle of the cross fire.

Our precious innocent african-american lives are being wiped away because of guns. It's time to take a stand and show people that guns aren't solving any problems but causing many more.

© Copyright 2006 Ashley Nicole Brown - All Rights Reserved
Poetic Concept
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since 2006-06-25
Posts 66
God's Fingerprint
1 posted 2006-06-25 06:23 PM


Nice and true...I dont think that gun violence only happens in our community it is just exploited more just as teen pregnancy which is more potent in the caucasion community, just not exploited in the media because most are middle class whites are having children and lower class blacks need help in raising kids outside the home so they look for the state for help which in turn critises them for baring a child with insufficent funds...anyways I am getting off subject good job...and this is so conroversial I love it...elevation is the key

"How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live"
                     Anonymous (Unknown)

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