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She's Fed Up
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She's Fed Up |
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Paradise1 Junior Member
since 2006-06-23
Posts 15Illinois, United States |
She's fed up with the fact that no one likes her She's fed up with the fact that no one sees the real her She's fed up with people judging her and don't know her She's fed with the fact that she's beautiful and no one sees it She's fed up with the fact that no one considers her a friend She's done with the people that loved her cause they left her behind She's through with people who doesn't want to listen to her ideas She's fed up with thinking she's not suppose to exist She's fed up and thats all ahe had to say about it. |
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Poetic Concept Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 66God's Fingerprint |
I think that this is very depressing, now when u explain beautiful is it a physical beauty or a inner beauty. I think that this child, teen, etc...should talk to someone who does care even if it isnt a family member a teacher or something, teachers got me through high school, I was jock that wrote poetry...lol though it seems unlikely I am quite I played basketball throughout high school and was extremely popular but I didnt like the uptempo lifestyle I like to think and write to escape reality once in a while and talk about things I am afarid to say this person should do the same...write...good write...elevation is the key... Return the favor on Swear to God "How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
welcome to the blue pages where when you are fed up you can simply disappear or not as you choose |
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Paradise1 Junior Member
since 2006-06-23
Posts 15Illinois, United States |
This person was someone I knew in school. She was always coming to school saying that no one cares for her, no one likes her, she has no reason to live. I was trying to help her, trying to show her that everyone has a reason to live even her. But she just wasn't seeing it. The type of beauty I was talking about was both. The physical beauty and inside beauty. I'm not gay or anything but she was a very a beautiful person but the way she acted or presented herself, like saying no one cares, no one wanted to be around her. I seriously hopes she seeks some counseling or something. |
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