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Paradise1
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since 2006-06-23
Posts 15
Illinois, United States

0 posted 2006-06-24 02:15 AM



It's hard to believe we'll be apart,
being away is something I never imagined from the start.
I'd never thought we would end,
every since we became more than friends
but everything dies just like a rose.
The gentle touch of your hand,
leads me into a fantasy land,
that would cause no harm just because
I'm in your arms.
My heart will miss that passionable kiss,
the taste of your sweet lips,
and your love for me.
I will remember the things we've been through
how much you love me and I love you
I don't want this to be over
this can't be through,
Don't they see my deep feelings for you!!!
You taught me I was much more,
than I ever thought-
all the joy, happiness, and love you brought,
You showed me I was beautiful inside and out.
I'll always remember the love you gave
and I'll try not to cry,
For your name will be engraved in my heart
and it will stay there till I die...

                 I Will Miss You

© Copyright 2006 Ashley Nicole Brown - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2006-06-24 02:38 AM


Welcome to Passions, Paradise1.  These are feelings everyone will understand.  Thanks for sharing.
Patricia
Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
2 posted 2006-06-24 08:26 AM


Universal feelings shared in your unique words.

A wonderful write.

Patricia

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
3 posted 2006-06-24 12:32 PM




"...everything dies just like a rose."

One of life's more painful lessons.  There is no greater terror than to love that which death will touch.


JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2006-06-26 02:03 PM




Sad, but very well written.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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